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ultmetal
Administrator
Number of posts: 16190
Age: 45
Registration date: 2007-01-04
|  Subject: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:55 pm | |
| http://vampirefreaks.com/musicreviews/comment.php?entry=4354
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jerseyultifan+
Metal master
Number of posts: 625
Age: 47
Registration date: 2009-09-02
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:45 pm | |
| wow! long but,well worth the read! this is excellent! very very well worded! congrats guys! this is a great one to save!   |
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James B.
Scurvy Skalliwag
Number of posts: 5490
Age: 47
Registration date: 2008-02-10
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:53 pm | |
| That wasn't long at all. I dig imformative and well thought out, grammatically correct writing. Too many folks nowadys, it seems, prefer the short and sweet approach. Have we become to lazy to write stuff anymore ? Thanks for posting Scott. Now let's pester Katon to do a vinyl run for the new Noise Chaos War.  _________________  |
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BillRoxx
Metal graduate
Number of posts: 439
Age: 43
Registration date: 2007-03-14
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:34 pm | |
| That was a good one! Nice story thanks for posting that! |
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Fat Freddy
Lord of all PBR's
Number of posts: 21096
Age: 42
Registration date: 2007-02-21
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:03 pm | |
| I wasn't aware that they promoted good music at VampireFreaks.com ... you learn something new every day.
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Troublezone
Dog Will Hunt!
Number of posts: 9879
Age: 36
Registration date: 2007-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:47 am | |
| Strange that a goth website would review a Christian thrash band. |
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Fat Freddy
Lord of all PBR's
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| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:23 am | |
| | Troublezone wrote: | | Strange that a goth website would review a Christian thrash band. |
S'what I'm sayin'.
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:35 am | |
| Those of you who were reading that, I didn't use word or any word processing program on this. I just wrote everything right into the review on there. By the way, I am the guy who wrote that piece on Into The Pit. Thanx for posting it Scott. I've seen my work published in different magazines in the recent years.
I do have a few books out. The novella I am writing right now shares a title with ULTIMATUM. My SN on VampireFreaks.com is LAKE FOSSIL (owner of the publishing imprint, LAKE FOSSIL PRESS and author of the book An Eye In Shadows under the imprint Broken Mindframe Books/Angry Guinea Books. The screen name came from one of my Science Fiction titles.)
You guys do have a friend on that site, and I not only reviewed Into The Pit -- I also reviewed two Tourniquet CDs, Fashion Bomb, one of Metallica's, Dagon, My Silent Wake, Saviour Machine, Grave Robber, Black Sabbath, and ULTIMATUM's evil twin Bloodstream Parade. (The ones on Fashion Bomb and Saviour Machine will also run long.)
If you guys want to add me on MySpace.com, feel free to do so. I was wondering when that review was going to make its way onto this message board.
I have a contest on here for those who want to win a free book or an anthology. |
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Eyesore
Metal is Forever
Number of posts: 5322
Age: 36
Registration date: 2009-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:23 am | |
| | James B. wrote: | | That wasn't long at all. I dig imformative and well thought out, grammatically correct writing. Too many folks nowadys, it seems, prefer the short and sweet approach. Have we become to lazy to write stuff anymore ? |
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James B.
Scurvy Skalliwag
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Dave the Boss
Metal is in my blood
Number of posts: 2571
Age: 21
Registration date: 2009-04-30
| | Subject: Re: Into the Pit essay at VampireFreaks.com Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:35 pm | |
| This has to be one of the worst 'essays' I've ever seen. A toddler could do better at writing a review. Reviews are meant to be short, informative and to the point, not a meandering piece of rubbish like this (not that I'm a great reviewer, but hey, that's the whole idea of a review right?). It fails as an essay as well. Back to writing 101 with this fellow. |
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