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muckie
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PostSubject: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 9:19 pm

I just composed this today in one sitting and wanted to share it. It's one of my better works and is a poem that makes a lot of metal references. Observe:

Heavy Metal Motherf***er (by Matt M.)

Rock you like a hurricane
Barking at the moon
Shattering the bells of hell
The Hellion screams, so listen well

Back for the attack and out of the cellar
Among the unforgiven, there lies
My friend of misery, I always tell her
The church of metal knows wrong from right

The preachers of the metal church
Have bricks and bones so strong to break
Defenders of the faith, they know
Peace for grabs should no one take, because

Pacifists are snake-oil salesmen
With bile and shit to sell
A phoenix appears in the east
To burn them away with a turbulent gale

Miss Madelaine is Venus with splendor
Poured lightly in sugar, sweet child of mine
If venom with death slowly hindered
She'd kick start my heart with sweet passion divine

Rock you like a hurricane
Barking at the moon
Shattering the bells of hell
The Hellion screams, so listen well


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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 9:48 pm

As a former High School English teacher and a life long Metal fan...I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:15 pm

Nice ! Now you need to set that to music and you got yourself a cool little song.
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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:29 pm

That sounds like a Sabaton song.  Their first several albums each had a song like that paying homage to metal bands.

EDIT: I give you "Metal Crue":

Quote :
Take some venom and accept
That you won't see Nazareth
The rainbow leads you home

Warrior sent to milky way
UFO shooting Gamma ray
A riot of destruction

Watch the rock bitch go down, vixen spread

When the priest killed a maiden in the metal church
Armored saints and warlocks watched the slaughter
Rage of the slayer forced the pretty maids
To kiss the queen in crimson glory

You were born a motor head
Bike's in flames you race ahead
You do the Kansas rush

Racing with the motley crew
Annihilator chasing you
With guns and burning roses

Status quo has been reached
Wasps unleashed

Take a sky ride with me
Then you'll see


Read more: Sabaton - Metal Crue Lyrics | MetroLyrics

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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:33 pm

I think your poem is lyrically better than that Sabaton song but that's exactly the kind of thing they were doing on their early albums. Their song "Metal Machine" from Primo Victoria is even closer to what you're doing because that song uses metal lyrics instead of just band names.

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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:03 pm

I have never heard the song by Sabaton, but that is pretty amusing to see that someone attempted it before! Laughing But it's a compliment to be told that my lyrics are better. I appreciate that.
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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Thu Feb 11, 2016 12:17 am

I take it you've been listening to Metalucifer lately.
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PostSubject: Re: Metal Poem: Heavy Metal Motherf***er   Thu Feb 11, 2016 9:53 am

I like when bands do that, mention and pay homage to genre. It's fun to try and figure out who they are referencing when it's not so straightforward.
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